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Editorial: [Keep/Drop, Simplify, Expand, Re-write, Re-organize, Move] #1040

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Fiach-Dubh opened this issue Jun 25, 2023 · 0 comments
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Editorial: [Keep/Drop, Simplify, Expand, Re-write, Re-organize, Move] #1040

Fiach-Dubh opened this issue Jun 25, 2023 · 0 comments
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Which part needs editing?
Page 322 Ch14

What editing does this need?
Some options: Keep/Drop, Simplify, Expand, Re-write, Re-organize, Move

wrong word. "being" should be "begin"

How does it currently read?
Copy the text that needs editing, if it is small enough

"Once the handshake has been completed, both nodes can now being to send each other encrypted messages."

How should it read?
Write a recommended solution here, if you can!

"Once the handshake has been completed, both nodes can now begin to send each other encrypted messages."
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